Typos

[Lailoken]

Also on sealed scroll:
"This calls for urgency, should you find this Golbug or the portal please investigate."

That first comma should be a ; or a .

[Graziel]

BETA 14

in save desc.

Difficulty: Maj'Eyal\
Campaign: Normal\

and BTW saving take ages (like 5 min each time i change zone)

[Grey]

In new game text:
"one hundred year" -> "one hundred years"
"leaking" -> "healing" I think

Tutorial text:
States no achievements granted... but I isn't there an achievement specifically for completing the tutorial? Maybe should say "No main game achievements granted".

Human race description:
"have know peace" -> "have known peace"

Elf race description:
"three subrace" -> "three subraces"

Shalore description:
"otehr" -> "other"

[trev]

During the introductory text.

The Shaloran elves .... are living happy lifes under ...

should be 'are living happy lives'

The dwarfs of the Iron Throne ... for nearly one hundred year, ...

should be 'for nearly one hundred years,

[trev]

Not sure if this is a typo as such, but just found some 'poisonous poisonous' arrows

[trev]

unidentified description of 'The Skin of Many' is 'stiched skin armor'

Should be 'stitched skin armor'

[Graziel]

2hweapon.lua

are naerly unstoppable, granting %d%%

->nearly

also stun and pin res is negligible

stun = self:addTemporaryValue("stun_immune", 0.1 * self:getTalentLevel(t)), --gives 0.5 at lvl 5

[Grey]

0.5 means 50% stun/pin resistance - not entirely negligible.

[Graziel]

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info = function(self, t)
		return ([[Enters an aggressive battle stance, increasing attack by %d and damage by %d at the cost of -10 defense and -10 armor.
		While berserking you are naerly unstoppable, granting %d%% stun and pinning resistance.]]):
		format(
			5 + self:getDex(7) * self:getTalentLevel(t),
			5 + self:getStr(7) * self:getTalentLevel(t),
			0.1 * self:getTalentLevel(t)
		)
	end,

well then it should be

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format(
			5 + self:getDex(7) * self:getTalentLevel(t),
			5 + self:getStr(7) * self:getTalentLevel(t),
			10 * self:getTalentLevel(t)
		)

[kingvictory2003]

"Slient Blade" should be "Silent Blade" I'm guessing.

Also, I'm still seeing "122th" instead of "122nd." Always gives me a small chuckle

[Lailoken]

when you cast regeneration, it says "you start to regenerate heath quickly."

[kingvictory2003]

In monster description of Rak'shor Cultist, "responsable" should be "responsible"

[Grey]

Anti-magic quest text:

"Brother, our guild, the Ziguranth, has been watching you, Human, and we believe that you have potential."
- way too many commas. Either cut out the Brother or cut out the Human.

"We can train you, you you need to prove..."
-> "We can train you, but you need to prove..."

"spells, scrolls or other magic devices"
- change scrolls to runes.

[greycat]

http://wooledge.org/~greg/te4.15.spelling

A couple hours' worth of proofreading. This was done against beta 15 (svn r1992), and during that time, beta 15b came out... but I guess most of it should still apply.

It's nowhere near a complete proofreading. I only got through a fraction of the .lua files before I got tired.

Spoilers. Lots of them. Don't read if you care about such things.

[darkgod]

Wooohhhh
Thanks a lot greycat!
It patches just fine