Typos

[Ploppy]

Some stuff I overlooked in the Corruptor trees:

Curse of Death - "The resistances will decrease with Magic stat" -> the spell doesn't lower resistances!

Poison Storm - "poisoning all creatures inside for doing x damage" -> either "for" or "doing", not both

Also, the three Mindslayer shields all have "Range 10.00", but as far as I can tell, they offer no ranged effects.

[tiger_eye]

"You are to heavily armored to use this talent." should be "You are too heavily armoured to use this talent."

Tactical AI info was defined twice for "cursed/strife - Smash"

An Earthen Vine talent used "CLONEIN" instead of "CLOSEIN" in the tactical AI info.

Patch attached.

[bricks]

The description of the shadow created by the Ambuscade talent reads "who's" - it should say "whose."

[greycat]

http://wooledge.org/~greg/te4.spelling.20110821

[Grey]

Heh, well-spotted on the red/purple robe thing.

[lukep]

Elemental Harmony description:

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		For %x turns all poisons and diseases will heal you instead of damaging you.

should be

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		For %d turns all poisons and diseases will heal you instead of damaging you.

I believe, as the first one can show "a" turns instead of 10, or "c" turns instead of 12.

[Aquillion]

Fortress Shadow, on unlocking the farportal:

"You maye use the farportal, however beware I sense a strange presence in the farportal room."

Aside from the 'maye', it's also a run-on sentence. I suggest:

"You may use the farportal, but beware - I sense a strange presence in the farportal room."

[greycat]

That one was already changed in svn:

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You may use the farportal; however, beware - I sense a strange presence in the farportal room.]],

Pretty close to your suggestion.

[shooth]

'Encumbered' on the inventory screens should be 'Encumbrance'. 'Encumbered 76/78' actually means you are not encumbered (burdened).

[Avianpilot]

Apparently Eyal has gained a few moons in svn, but certain descriptions didn't keep up with the change.

The description for the Pendent of the Sun and Moons:

"This small pendent depicts a hematite moons eclipsing a golden sun..."

could be:
"This small pendent depicts hematite moons eclipsing a golden sun..." (possibly with a number between 'depicts' and 'hematite')

or reverted back to:

"This small pendent depicts a hematite moon eclipsing a golden sun"

depending on how many moons are supposed to be shown on the amulet.

Also, in the Anorithil description, they are "Masters of Sun and Moons magic", which sounds a bit awkward. Despite there being multiple moons, the description could still say "Masters of Sun and Moon magic", unless the different moons are supposed to give the Anorithil different powers.

[Grey]

I think the pendant should stick to one moon, since both can't eclipse the sun at the same time.

For the Anorithil description it could be changed to "Lunar". But just saying "Moon" is all right too. You don't have to spell out multiple moons everywhere.

[darkgod]

Yeah the two moons are on the same orbit on opposite sides, it's impossible to see two at once

[Aquillion]

I think the pendant should stick to one moon, since both can't eclipse the sun at the same time.

For the Anorithil description it could be changed to "Lunar". But just saying "Moon" is all right too. You don't have to spell out multiple moons everywhere.

If it's changed to "Lunar", it should be "Solar and Lunar magic" for symmetry.

But just "moon" seems fine to me. 'Moon magic' is the magic of moons in general; it doesn't have any implication about there only being one moon (in the same way that 'fire magic' doesn't imply that you draw your magic from only one specific fire.)

[tiger_eye]

"Defense" is used the vast majority of places, but "defence" still exists in a few places. The attached patch fixes this.

[trev]

Description of Acid Blood.

.... and reduces the attacker accuracy by x [y]

should be

... and reduces the attackers accuracy by x [y]