Typos
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Re: Typos
I see that "ingore" got fixed in the SVN code, could "unharmed" (unarmed) be coming next?
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On the loading screen:
"Corruptors fed off the essence of others, and can use their own corrupted blood to launch deadly magical attacks."
Should be
"Corruptors feed off the essence of others, and can use their own corrupted blood to launch deadly magical attacks."
"Corruptors fed off the essence of others, and can use their own corrupted blood to launch deadly magical attacks."
Should be
"Corruptors feed off the essence of others, and can use their own corrupted blood to launch deadly magical attacks."
Re: Typos
Deep Bellow Excavation Report 2:
"Miners are roudy, hrm!"
should be
"Miners are rowdy, hrm!"
and
"More Sher'Tul artifacts found, possible even remains of weapons."
should be
"More Sher'Tul artifacts found, possibly even remains of weapons."
"Miners are roudy, hrm!"
should be
"Miners are rowdy, hrm!"
and
"More Sher'Tul artifacts found, possible even remains of weapons."
should be
"More Sher'Tul artifacts found, possibly even remains of weapons."
Re: Typos
Dwarven starting text:
"You have sworn that once you reach the Iron Council safely you will take on a life of adventurer, looking for fame and treasures of old."
should be
"You have sworn that once you reach the Iron Council safely you will take on the life of an adventurer, looking for fame and treasures of old."
or possibly
"You have sworn that once you reach the Iron Council safely you will take on a life of adventure, looking for fame and treasures of old."
"You have sworn that once you reach the Iron Council safely you will take on a life of adventurer, looking for fame and treasures of old."
should be
"You have sworn that once you reach the Iron Council safely you will take on the life of an adventurer, looking for fame and treasures of old."
or possibly
"You have sworn that once you reach the Iron Council safely you will take on a life of adventure, looking for fame and treasures of old."
Re: Typos
Just so you know, DG, you fixed the second typo in SVN, but not the first.Velorien wrote:Deep Bellow Excavation Report 2:
"Miners are roudy, hrm!"
should be
"Miners are rowdy, hrm!"
and
"More Sher'Tul artifacts found, possible even remains of weapons."
should be
"More Sher'Tul artifacts found, possibly even remains of weapons."
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Re: Typos
Both the description of a vilespawn and the log message heralding its arrival incorrectly refer to Corpathus as "Corpus".
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On completing the Lichform quest:
"The secrets of death lay open to you!"
Should be
"The secrets of death are laid open to you!"
(this is a common mistake: "lay" is either the past tense of "to lie", or the transitive verb "to lay [a thing in a place]")
"The secrets of death lay open to you!"
Should be
"The secrets of death are laid open to you!"
(this is a common mistake: "lay" is either the past tense of "to lie", or the transitive verb "to lay [a thing in a place]")
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More loading screen tips:
"Archers are fast and deadly, and with pinning shots can render their foe helpless as swiftly dispatch them."
Should be
"Archers are fast and deadly, and with pinning shots can render their foes helpless as they swiftly dispatch them."
"Alchemist can transmute gems to create fiery explosions, and are known to travel with a sturdy golem for extra protection."
Should be
"Alchemists can transmute gems to create fiery explosions, and are known to travel with a sturdy golem for extra protection."
"Who knows what dark thoughts drive ones to necromancy? Its art is as old as magic itself, and its creations have plagued all the races since the earliest memories."
Should be
"Who knows what dark thoughts drive people to necromancy? Its art is as old as magic itself, and its creations have plagued all the races since the earliest memories."
"Records say that giants once lived civilised lives, with mastery of many crafts and sciences. Now though they have adopted nomadic cultures, turning hostile against those that encroach on their lands."
Should be
"Records say that giants once lived civilised lives, with mastery of many crafts and sciences. Now, though, they have adopted nomadic cultures, turning hostile against those that encroach on their lands."
"Dwarves are naturally inquisitive people, but do not enjoy such inquisition turned on them. Most live secretive lives in their closed off city, the Iron Throne."
Should be
"Dwarves are naturally a inquisitive people, but do not enjoy such inquisition turned on them. Most live secretive lives in their closed-off city, the Iron Throne."
"Rumours tell of a shadowy cult kidnapping women and performing strange rites. Their intention is unknown, and they have so far evaded capture."
Should be
"Rumours tell of a shadowy cult kidnapping women and performing strange rites. Their intentions are unknown, and they have so far evaded capture."
"Archers are fast and deadly, and with pinning shots can render their foe helpless as swiftly dispatch them."
Should be
"Archers are fast and deadly, and with pinning shots can render their foes helpless as they swiftly dispatch them."
"Alchemist can transmute gems to create fiery explosions, and are known to travel with a sturdy golem for extra protection."
Should be
"Alchemists can transmute gems to create fiery explosions, and are known to travel with a sturdy golem for extra protection."
"Who knows what dark thoughts drive ones to necromancy? Its art is as old as magic itself, and its creations have plagued all the races since the earliest memories."
Should be
"Who knows what dark thoughts drive people to necromancy? Its art is as old as magic itself, and its creations have plagued all the races since the earliest memories."
"Records say that giants once lived civilised lives, with mastery of many crafts and sciences. Now though they have adopted nomadic cultures, turning hostile against those that encroach on their lands."
Should be
"Records say that giants once lived civilised lives, with mastery of many crafts and sciences. Now, though, they have adopted nomadic cultures, turning hostile against those that encroach on their lands."
"Dwarves are naturally inquisitive people, but do not enjoy such inquisition turned on them. Most live secretive lives in their closed off city, the Iron Throne."
Should be
"Dwarves are naturally a inquisitive people, but do not enjoy such inquisition turned on them. Most live secretive lives in their closed-off city, the Iron Throne."
"Rumours tell of a shadowy cult kidnapping women and performing strange rites. Their intention is unknown, and they have so far evaded capture."
Should be
"Rumours tell of a shadowy cult kidnapping women and performing strange rites. Their intentions are unknown, and they have so far evaded capture."