I decided to go through the text used in the chronomancer intro quest and do a few changes to the text to make it read a little better. Here's the revised intro dialogue, with changes in red:
You are a chronomancer, a Keeper of Reality.
The Keepers of Reality are a group of chronomancers who took upon the self-assigned task of preserving the timelines around Eyal.
You have trained for most of your life in the 'town' of Point Zero, the stronghold of the Keepers, placed at the very center of all time threads since the Spellblaze disrupted the temporal streams and permitted chronomancy to exist.
Point Zero keepers must constantly stay vigilant against the monstrous horrors of the unreality outside.
You have heard about temporal disruptions in Maj'Eyal and want to investigate.
However, Grand Keeper of Reality Zemekkys has requested to see you.
Zemekky's conversation:
@playername@, nice to see you again! Or is this the first time that you have seen me?
The answers are fine. His response:
Ah, for you perhaps, but not for me.
Listen, someday you will encounter me again but it will not be me as you see now. It will be a younger me, if you will.
This is very important: do not tell my previous me about the current me. Understood?
And again, the answers are fine.
Also, some minor things about the NPCs in the Unhallowed Morass: The descriptions for the orb spinners and the orb weavers use it's (as in, "it is") instead of its (as in the possessive).
Sorry if I seem really picky, but I just happened to notice these things and decided to post them here.
[RC3] Chronomancer intro quest could use some text revisions
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Re: [RC3] Chronomancer intro quest could use some text revis
Thanks 
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