Typos (1.6beta and onwards)

[richardhawk]

Pulverizing Auger - "stone-shaterring" -> "stone-shattering"

[richardhawk]

Stormshield rune's message is "[X] summons a storm to protect him!", without regard to actual actor gender. him -> them

[Unmaker]

The description for Arcane Combat says:

While dual wielding or using a shield, the chance is reduced to 50% for both weapons.

That is unclear in two ways: is that reduced (multiplied), reduced (subtraction), or reduced (forced to 50%) and, for many characters, a shield is not a weapon. It would be clearer as:

While dual-wielding or using a shield, the chance is divided evenly between the two items. Shields will only trigger the spell if they are used in a melee attack.

[starsapphire]

in data/talents/misc/races.lua

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	info = function(self, t)
		return ([[Orcs have been the prey of the other races for thousands of years, with or without justification. They have learnt to withstand things that would break weaker races.
		When your life goes below 50%% your sheer determination cleanses you of %d mental debuff(s) based on talent level and Willpower.  This can only happen once every %d turns.
		Also increases physical save by +%d.]]):
		format(t.getDebuff(self, t), t.getSaves(self, t), self:getTalentCooldown(t))
	end,

The correct order should be

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		format(t.getDebuff(self, t), self:getTalentCooldown(t), t.getSaves(self, t))

[GlassGo]

Metaphasic Echoes description "Each turn you they are open you project an occult..."
Seems first "you" is excessive here.

[GlassGo]

Oozing Heart's Ooze Spit talent description missing dot in the end after "the damage will increase with Dexterity stat".

[HenryEx]

The "Bizzare contraption" should probably be called "Bizarre contraption".


edit: also it doesn't have a power source, it should probably be powered by unknown forces?

[HenryEx]

The description for the effects from the elemental tinker salves (frost/fire/water salves) all read:

"Provides a frost aura, giving you..."

Not just on the frost salve, but on all of them.

[InC]

The tooltip of the status effect for ogrewielding penalty still claims proc damage is only reduced for the offhand.

[cowking]

Rigor Mortis states projectile travel speed as instant (it isn't).

[WonderingMonster]

In 1.6.7, Tech Overload's description says

"You override all security measures of your tinkers, allowing you to reset the cooldown of %d of most of your steamtech talents of tier %d or less and instantly increases your steam level by %d%% of the maximum."

The bold part seems like it doesn't belong.

[Zonoshee]

Wild gift / Summoning (advanced) - Wild Summon
"Disminishes" should be "diminishes"

Mindstar ego "Balance" stat - "Equilibrium when hit: +x"
Gaining equilibrium is bad. Should probably be a - instead of a +?

[Zonoshee]

Prodigies / Elemental Surge:
Replace tabs with one space.

Prodigies / Endless Woes:
Replace tabs with one space.

Basic font can't handle tabs, also it looks ugly.

[Zonoshee]

Unique - Focus Whip
Has double % in description, remove one.

[OnceUponAQuine]

"Iron Greatsword of Dampening"

This should be "damping", although conflating the two words is extremely common and this confuses no-one and only bothers pedants.