Typos
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Re: Typos
Corruption/Demonic Pact 4 - Suffuse Life: "to replinish" -> "to replenish"
Corruption/Doom Shield 1 - Osmosis Shield: "This spell disabled automatically..." -> "This spell is disabled automatically..." (but perhaps even better "This spell turns off automatically...")
same for Corruption/Spellblaze 2 - Rain of Fire
also: "at most two meteors will fall near your per turn" -> "at most two meteors will fall near you per turn"
Corruption/Doom Shield 2 - Hardened Core: "Taking example from Mal'Rok, the demon's homeworld you harden yourself." -> "Taking example from Mal'Rok, the demons' homeworld, you harden yourself."
Corruption/Doom Covenant 1 & 2: "above 10% of a creatures max life" -> "above 10% of a creature's max life"
Corruption/Doom Shield 1 - Osmosis Shield: "This spell disabled automatically..." -> "This spell is disabled automatically..." (but perhaps even better "This spell turns off automatically...")
same for Corruption/Spellblaze 2 - Rain of Fire
also: "at most two meteors will fall near your per turn" -> "at most two meteors will fall near you per turn"
Corruption/Doom Shield 2 - Hardened Core: "Taking example from Mal'Rok, the demon's homeworld you harden yourself." -> "Taking example from Mal'Rok, the demons' homeworld, you harden yourself."
Corruption/Doom Covenant 1 & 2: "above 10% of a creatures max life" -> "above 10% of a creature's max life"
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Re: Typos
Not 100% sure this counts as a typo, but the fluff description for Ogre Warmaster reads 'She is impatient to test his new combat skills.'
Re: Typos
Infinite Dungeon entrance (in the Ruined Dungeon): "You should not go there, there is no way back. Ever. Maybe later when you did all you must do" -> "You should not go there. There is no way back. Ever. Maybe later when you have done all you must do."
(note both tense change and removal of comma splice)
(note both tense change and removal of comma splice)
Re: Typos
Rune of Reflection, when you used it.
Description:
Blah-blah-blah, then...
"The effect will scale with your magic stat.
Its effect scale with your Magic stat."
Description:
Blah-blah-blah, then...
"The effect will scale with your magic stat.
Its effect scale with your Magic stat."
English isn't my native language.