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Re: Typos

#121 Post by Susramanian »

In the prelude to the blue wizard fight, Aeryn's dialog shows up in Alatar's dialog box, which looks weird. When you win and get the congratulatory text, inhabitant should be inhabitants.

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Re: Typos

#122 Post by PowerWyrm »

New undead starting text:
"You has been raised" (have)
"a place caleld" (called)
"on the south the Misty Mountains" (south of the)

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Re: Typos

#123 Post by darkgod »

fixed
[tome] joylove: You can't just release an expansion like one would release a Kraken XD
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Re: Typos

#124 Post by Repton »

greycat wrote:I believe the official stance on dialect is that ToME's text should be written in the style that Tolkien would have used. Since he was British, that means we have "armour" and "familiarise" and so on.
I'm pretty sure the OED prefers -ize because it's more etymologically pure. And Tolkien worked at the OED for a while..

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Re: Typos

#125 Post by PowerWyrm »

Circle of the Wise:
"The removal of the could..." (cloud)
"this cuold be a death trap..." (could)

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Re: Typos

#126 Post by BrownianMotion »

I don't know if this has been posted... (id rather not sift through 7 pages of errors)

For the Cursed, under the slaughter talent for the ability Cleave.
Shouldn't there be "game.logPlayer(self, "You cannot use %s without an axe!", t.name)" under the 'if then statement' for not having an ax.

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Re: Typos

#127 Post by overtrix »

No it's not a typo, but it's not brandnewthreadworthy either ...

If you go to the house of the thieving, murderous wretch after you've killed the thieving, murderous wretch - you get to tell the thieving, murderous wretch that he should prepare to die :)

Also maybe when you get the real one back, you should be allowed to drop the fake one (or it should do something dramatic like crumble to dust, or be given a new description) ... didn't check what happens if you later use the fake, but if it sends you back to the other place, will be a real "grr" moment !

Much later --- Oh wait, I'm being dumb aren't I - the orbs will be identical :roll: ---

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Re: Typos

#128 Post by edge2054 »

Another circle of the wise correction (tempest quest dialog)

A few years ago he has gone rogue...

should be

A few years ago he went rogue...

And Danger

The storm is raging of your head.

should be

The storm is raging above your head. (or over your head maybe)

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Re: Typos

#129 Post by PowerWyrm »

Orc corruptor: "He mumbles is a harsh tongue." (in a harsh tongue)

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Re: Typos

#130 Post by darkgod »

fixed
[tome] joylove: You can't just release an expansion like one would release a Kraken XD
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[tome] phantomfrettchen: your ability not to tease anyone is simply stunning ;)

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Re: Typos

#131 Post by trev »

The 'Back and There Again' quest log suggests you look for the two items in
' the moria ' instead of ' moria '

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Re: Typos

#132 Post by PowerWyrm »

"The Moria" or "Moria" are both correct.

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Re: Typos

#133 Post by Grey »

On the Master's sign in Tol Falas 7, should be "marshmallows".

Perhaps this thread should be stickied? I envisage a few more corrections needed in terms of setting change stuff in the next beta.
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Re: Typos

#134 Post by PowerWyrm »

The "Dead Marches" should probably be the "Dead Marshes".

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Re: Typos

#135 Post by Lailoken »

on the sealed scroll:
"While you where gone..."
should read
"While you were gone..."

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