Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/cold-drake.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/cold-drake.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/cold-drake.lua (working copy) @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_COLD_DRAKE", name = "cold drake hatchling", color=colors.WHITE, display="d", - desc = [[A drake hatchling, not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]], + desc = [[A drake hatchling. Not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]], level_range = {8, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 1, rank = 1, size_category = 2, Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/naga.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/naga.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/naga.lua (working copy) @@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_NAGA", name = "naga psyren", color=colors.YELLOW, image="npc/naga_psyren.png", - desc = [[A naga psyren, she looks at you with great intensity. + desc = [[A naga psyren; she looks at you with great intensity. Psyrens are dangerous nagas that can directly assault your mind.]], level_range = {36, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 4, Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/horror.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/horror.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/horror.lua (working copy) @@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR", subtype = "temporal", name = "temporal devourer", color=colors.CRIMSON, - desc = "A headless round creature with stubtly legs and arms. Its body seems to be all teeth.", + desc = "A headless round creature with stubbly legs and arms. Its body seems to be all teeth.", level_range = {10, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 1, rank = 2, @@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ subtype = "temporal", dredge = 1, name = "dredgling", color=colors.TAN, - desc = "A small pink skinned humanoid with large bulbous eyes.", + desc = "A small pink-skinned humanoid with large bulbous eyes.", level_range = {10, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 1, rank = 2, @@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ subtype = "temporal", dredge = 1, name = "temporal dredge", color=colors.PINK, - desc = "A hulking pink skinned creature with long arms as thick as tree trunks. It drags it's knuckles on the ground as it lumbers towards you.", + desc = "A hulking pink-skinned creature with long arms as thick as tree trunks. It drags its knuckles on the ground as it lumbers towards you.", level_range = {15, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 4, rank = 2, @@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ subtype = "temporal", dredge = 1, name = "dredge captain", color=colors.SALMON, - desc = "A thin pink skinned creature with long spindly arms. Half it's body is old and wrinkly and the other half appears quite young.", + desc = "A thin pink-skinned creature with long spindly arms. Half its body is old and wrinkly and the other half appears quite young.", level_range = {20, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 6, rank = 3, @@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR", subtype = "temporal", name = "temporal stalker", color=colors.STEEL_BLUE, - desc = "A slender mettallic monstrousity with long claws in place of fingers and razor sharp teeth.", + desc = "A slender metallic monstrosity with long claws in place of fingers and razor sharp teeth.", level_range = {20, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 6, size_category = 3, @@ -556,7 +556,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR", subtype = "temporal", name = "void horror", color=colors.GREY, - desc = "It looks like a hole in spacetime, but you get the impression it's somehow more then that.", + desc = "It looks like a hole in spacetime, but you get the impression it's somehow more than that.", level_range = {20, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 4, rank = 2, @@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ if t.type[1] == "chronomancy/anomalies" then ts[#ts+1] = id end end self:forceUseTalent(rng.table(ts), {ignore_energy=true}) - game.logSeen(self, "%s has collappsed in upon itself.", self.name) + game.logSeen(self, "%s has collapsed in upon itself.", self.name) end, resolvers.sustains_at_birth(), @@ -675,3 +675,5 @@ end end, } + + Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/jelly.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/jelly.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/jelly.lua (working copy) @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ unique = true, name = "Malevolent Dimensional Jelly", color=colors.VIOLET, image="npc/jelly-darkgrey.png", blood_color = colors.VIOLET, - desc = "A strange black blob on the dungeon floor, through it you seem to be able to see other times and places. As you stare you see things moving out of it.", + desc = "A strange black blob on the dungeon floor; through it you seem to be able to see other times and places. As you stare you see things moving out of it.", level_range = {25, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 50, max_life = resolvers.rngavg(50,90), life_rating = 5, Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/multihued-drake.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/multihued-drake.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/multihued-drake.lua (working copy) @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_MULTIHUED_DRAKE", name = "multi-hued drake hatchling", color=colors.PURPLE, display="d", - desc = [[A drake hatchling, not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]], + desc = [[A drake hatchling. Not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]], level_range = {15, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 1, rank = 1, size_category = 2, Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/yaech.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/yaech.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/yaech.lua (working copy) @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH", name = "yaech diver", color=colors.BLUE, - desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks, they share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]], + desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks. They share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]], level_range = {1, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 1, max_life = resolvers.rngavg(50,70), @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH", name = "yaech hunter", color=colors.UMBER, - desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks, they share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]], + desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks. They share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]], level_range = {1, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 2, max_life = resolvers.rngavg(90,110), @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH", name = "yaech mindslayer", color=colors.YELLOW, - desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks, they share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]], + desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks. They share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]], level_range = {2, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 2, max_life = resolvers.rngavg(90,110), @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH", name = "yaech psion", color=colors.RED, - desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks, they share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]], + desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks. They share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]], level_range = {3, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 3, max_life = resolvers.rngavg(80,90), Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/swarm.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/swarm.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/swarm.lua (working copy) @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_INSECT", name = "midge swarm", color=colors.UMBER, image="npc/midge_swarm.png", - desc = "A swarm of midges, they want blood.", + desc = "A swarm of midges; they want blood.", level_range = {1, 25}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 1, max_life = resolvers.rngavg(1,2), Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/fire-drake.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/fire-drake.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/fire-drake.lua (working copy) @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_FIRE_DRAKE", name = "fire drake hatchling", color=colors.RED, display="d", - desc = [[A drake hatchling, not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]], + desc = [[A drake hatchling; not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]], level_range = {8, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 1, rank = 1, size_category = 2, Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/sunwall-town.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/sunwall-town.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/sunwall-town.lua (working copy) @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_SUNWALL_TOWN", name = "human guard", color=colors.LIGHT_UMBER, - desc = [[A stern looking guard, he will not let you disturb the town.]], + desc = [[A stern-looking guard, he will not let you disturb the town.]], level_range = {1, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 1, max_life = resolvers.rngavg(70,80), @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_SUNWALL_TOWN", name = "elven archer", color=colors.UMBER, - desc = [[A stern looking guard, he will not let you disturb the town.]], + desc = [[A stern-looking guard, he will not let you disturb the town.]], level_range = {1, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 3, max_life = resolvers.rngavg(50,60), Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/bird.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/bird.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/bird.lua (working copy) @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ name = "Phoenix", unique = true, display = "B", color=colors.VIOLET, rarity = 200, - desc = [[Ever burning, ever dying, ever reviving, the Phoenix swoops upon you, seeking to share its fiery fate with you.]], + desc = [[Ever burning, ever dying, ever reviving, the Phoenix swoops down upon you, seeking to share its fiery fate with you.]], level_range = {40, 75}, exp_worth = 10, max_life = 1000, life_rating = 23, fixed_rating = true, max_mana = 1000, Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/storm-drake.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/storm-drake.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/storm-drake.lua (working copy) @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_STORM_DRAKE", name = "storm drake hatchling", color=colors.BLUE, display="d", - desc = [[A drake hatchling, not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]], + desc = [[A drake hatchling. Not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]], level_range = {8, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 1, rank = 1, size_category = 2, Index: game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/telugoroth.lua =================================================================== --- game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/telugoroth.lua (revision 2589) +++ game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/telugoroth.lua (working copy) @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_TELUGOROTH", name = "telugoroth", color=colors.KHAKI, - desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself. It's blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]], + desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself. Its blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]], level_range = {10, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 2, max_life = resolvers.rngavg(70,80), @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_TELUGOROTH", name = "greater telugoroth", color=colors.YELLOW, - desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself. It's blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]], + desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself. Its blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]], level_range = {12, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 4, max_life = resolvers.rngavg(70,80), life_rating = 10, @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_TELUGOROTH", name = "ultimate telugoroth", color=colors.GOLD, - desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself. It's blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]], + desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself. Its blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]], level_range = {15, nil}, exp_worth = 1, rarity = 6, rank = 3,